anybody here actually GOOD at english??

[phragle]

I need a paper proof read APA argument.

 

[Chris]

I'm pretty proficient at "marketing English" but your best bet is Fund. It'll give him a reason to take that fancy degree of his out for a spin.

 

[phragle]

where is he hiding???? fundy where are you?????

 

[Buoy]

Has anyone invited Puder??
He'll help you out.:sifone:

Hmmmm... Need to go back to the old board for a minute....

 

[Tony]

Donzi, can probably help.

 

[Edward R. Cozzi]

I was a proof-reader and typesetter for a printing company for many years. I always aced English and especially English grammar, so if I can be of help...

 

[Trim'd Up]

I be really good at english, but I ain't know good at spellin':rofl:

 

[phragle]

here it is... Im open to all comments, I know I still need to do the reference page tonite, it's APA style

 

[stecz20]

its sucks, rewrite it.....:03::03:

 

[Sea-Dated]

i suck.....:03::03:

:26::26:

 

[Edward R. Cozzi]

Phragle:
Please do not take offense, but here's what I have found.

Your sentence structure is clumsy. You have several run-on sentences, some misplaced modifiers and a few dangling participles. If you want me to re-write the whole thing, it would be easier than trying to fix what's wrong. Sorry.
Ed

 

[phragle]

damn..I suck and it's due in the morning.

 

[phragle]

Ed for reference on how my teacher grades, this was my last paper, it got a 98%

 

[MarylandMark]

Raul (orss)- none better... :biggrinjester:

 

[03darkshadow]

Phragle:
Please do not take offense, but here's what I have found.

Your sentence structure is clumsy. You have several run-on sentences, some misplaced modifiers and a few dangling participles. If you want me to re-write the whole thing, it would be easier than trying to fix what's wrong. Sorry.
Ed

owwwwwch

 

[Trim'd Up]

There ya go. Just get Ed to write it for you. Where were you when I was in college?:03:

 

[Buoy]

Phragle:
Please do not take offense, but here's what I have found.

Your structure is clumsy. You have several run-on s, some misplaced modifiers and a few dangling participles.

That almost sounds dirty. Like a really bad audition for a porn movie...:26:

 

[ChiefApache]

I need a paper proof read APA argument.

I proof technical documents/brochures all the time. You're welcome to send it my way.

 

[phragle]

chief, it's an attachment on this thread agruff.doc...

 

[MarylandMark]

You're welcome to send it my way.

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